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blue lotus, charm offensive, Cleopatra, Elaine Sciolino, fragrance, Les Liaisons Dangereuses, perfume, romance fiction, Un Jardin Sur Le Nil
Peter, the hero (antihero?) in my story Operation Séduction, is fond of Shakespeare’s Antony and Cleopatra. He likes to refer to Leslie Favreau as his “serpent of old Nile.” Little does he realize how venomous she truly is.
Un Jardin Sur Le Nil, a unisex perfume by Hermès, is supposed to evoke a stroll through the botanical gardens at Aswan. The scent is redolent of green mango, lotus, calamus and sycamore.
6. Un Jardin Sur Le Nil
Leslie tapped a lacquered fingernail impatiently on the mosaic bistro table in Wynken de Worde, the popular café-bookstore where she had arranged to meet Peter for a status update. He was late, which was unlike him. As a woman she considered it her prerogative to be late, and indeed, she would never dream of arriving anywhere near the announced time for a dinner or cocktail party. One must always make an entrance. She disliked it, however, when a man kept her waiting. Finally she saw Peter wending his way through the closely spaced tables.
“There’s my serpent of old Nile,” he said affectionately, and laid down a little nosegay of autumn flowers for her. A reference to Cleopatra, she supposed. She was not averse to the comparison, though she remembered reading somewhere that Cleopatra, far from being a beauty, had in fact possessed a rather plain face. The Egyptian queen’s celebrated powers of seduction were the result of careful study and effort, supplemented by lavish spending. “I thought you’d be browsing the books,” he continued, and added playfully, “I was looking for you in the ancient history section.”
“Peter, I could take that as a compliment or as an insult. I choose to consider it a compliment.”
He grasped her outstretched hand and, bending, brought it to his lips with just a whisper of contact. “You know you’re the queen of my heart,” he said gallantly. They placed their orders, both opting for the double espresso.
She asked in a languid, almost bored voice, “How goes it with the little Gooden? A success, yes?”
He steepled his fingers in front of him. “You were right. She’s reluctant for a reason that is not immediately apparent. She is visibly uncomfortable around me, though her blushes show she’s not indifferent. This calls for a charm offensive, an opération séduction. It may take some time.”
She wrinkled her nose in surprise and displeasure. Forgetting that she had described Cynthia as an ice princess, she said, “Peter, you amaze me. Since when does it require a charm offensive to bed a nobody like Cynthia Gooden? I thought you would make short work of her.”
He frowned. “Perhaps I’m losing my touch. I’m aging, after all. I feel… older these days.
“Nonsense.” She picked up a set of tiny tongs to drop a cube of brown sugar into her espresso, and waited for it to soften. Obviously his male ego needed stroking. In spite of their bluster, men were very insecure. She would oblige, verbally at least, but any physical parts of him in need of stroking would have to wait until his task was accomplished. “You’re very sexy, Peter. More so than when I first met you. La Gooden is no doubt melting for you, but she’s timid. You overwhelm her.”
“Yes, there is something skittish about her. She reminds me of a plump little Persian cat I brought home one day when I was in grade school. That cat used to rub against my legs constantly and look up at me with her big saucer eyes, pleading for attention, but whenever I tried to pet her, she shied away.”
“But you swept her up into your arms, and voilà, she was yours, yes?”
“No. I got her a soft round cat bed where she felt safe, and whenever she was in the bed, she allowed me to fondle her,” he said, smiling again.
“Ah. But this is a woman, not a cat. Have you made any progress at all?” she asked, unable to keep a slightly scornful tone from her voice.
“Certainly,” he said. “She invited me to join the advisory board for a show she’s doing on perfumes, and we’re having dinner on Friday.”
“Take her home after dinner and invite yourself in,” advised Leslie.
“Patience, mon serpent,” answered Peter. “Allow me to conduct matters as I see fit. I do, after all, have more experience seducing females than you. Unless there’s something you’re not telling me?” He grinned wickedly.
Men were so predictable. She smiled coolly at him, grasping her crystal pendant in her right hand, and then, as he watched, letting two fingers drift lower to caress the top of her left breast.
“There is a great deal you don’t know about me, Peter. If you please me, perhaps one day you’ll learn my most… intimate secrets.”
Copyright 2014 by Linnet Moss
Note: The concept of the “charm offensive” or opération séduction, comes from Elaine Sciolino’s 2011 book La Seduction: How the French Play the Game of Life. I highly recommend it! We could all use a little more charm in our lives.
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Delicious writing, Linnet! Loved this. (And wish I was drinking a glass of wine and not a cup of coffee!)
“Delicious” is the highest praise of all in my book. Many thanks for following the story!
This is the first post I’ve read on the book. I’ll have to come back and dig for the older stuff when I get a chance. Now my curiousity is piqued!
Even better 🙂
Since I’ve heard the “Liasions” radio drama with Ciaran and Lindsay Duncan I just can “hear” Leslie with Lindsay voice ;-), although I assume that the accent would be slightly different.
Apparently Cleopatra’s conversation was simply irresistible.
Yes, Cleopatra had “it,” whatever that was. But her powers of fascination seem to have had no impact on Octavian. I conclude that he was a seriously cold fish.
Octavian had big projects in mind. Cleopatra could be included just as a trophy to be shown off in his triumph through the Via Sacra. I would like to think that HBO’s version was the “real” one, she knew he will never ever give her what she wanted and she killed herself hopefully telling in his face that thing of “you have a rotten soul”, 🙂
Anyway he was a cold fish I have no doubt about it. 🙂
Leslie is a piece of work…the photo of the cat cracked me up….looking forward to the next installment. I have almost finished Buckwheat Honeymoon. Will be sad to say goodbye to your fascinating characters.
You read the whole trilogy! Such a compliment. That tickles me because they were my first efforts and sometimes I think I ought to go back and change things. But they have a great deal of personal meaning, so I haven’t done that yet. Still, I think my writing improved in some ways over time with the later books, while losing a bit of the original heat 😉
Laura and James have cameo roles in a few of the later stories. I couldn’t say goodbye to them either.
I love it that it reflects you in your writing journey and has personal meaning. I guess them being online means it would be very tempting to rewrite stuff you want to refine. I thought they were thoroughly enjoyable, erudite yet earthy erotica filled with delicious food descriptions. 🙂
You just made my day! 🙂
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